New Chapter

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Haven’t written for a while. I’ve been busy. I won’t bore you with the details.

I’ve revised Chapter One of my novel, “Opus Breanna”  and then completely rewrote it and put it up for comparison. I’d like someone to review both, if they’re up to it, and let me know what you think. The auto-reward is fairly high, but that’s because the new chapter one is 22k words by itself. The old one is only 14k, but that’s still too much in my book.

I realize that my novel has a bunch of holes in it, but I’m trying to figure out the best way to fill them without it looking like I rented a back hoe to assist. Any advice you can provide will be graciously accepted.

I have a wedding tonight (I don’t even think I know them… but my wife is dragging me along), and then a car show tomorrow (my father in law has an old Mustang to show), so I don’t know how much I’ll be online. I’ll try to take some pictures of the car show, if I remember to take my camera up there 😉

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>jace
neophyte novelist

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